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Identity Crisis by ~Veinandra:iconVeinandra:



You see how the beautiful Drow is coming
In all her glory;
With her ruby eyes like oceans
With her white hair as clear snow
With her dark skin like promise of the night

Querrice Shavr'rath
After the fierce battle
Still beautiful
But still confused

Imagine the tall surface elf
In all her pity;
With peace in her soul
With adoration in her heart
With hands which never touched the sword

That was the person
That fiery Querrice have seen
When she looked in the mirror
When she looked in her mind

That was a very difficult battle
The children of warriors will talk about
it many times, after thousand years will pass
The battle of victory
But Querrice lost her memories
Lost her sight
She isn't Drow anymore, she must suffer
on surface as common surface elf

She was wandering trought forrest
Where she killed so many of creatures
Where she captured so many of victims
When a forrest elf notices her and screamed in panic:
"Drow"!

Drow? Where? That is terrible!
Where to hide! Where to run!
But the elf was looking at her!
"Querrice Shavr'rath, our Nemesis"!

The elf ran up with greatly panic
And left Querrice with a strange feeling
Of something undone
Of something misfitted
Of something that is so near
and so far at the same time

***

The beautiful Drow is coming
In all her glory;
With her ruby eyes like oceans
With her white hair as clear snow
With her dark skin like promise of night...

...And with a little insane glee at her face
©2008-2009 ~Veinandra
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A contest entry for *Lolth-Scourge - a Drow club, the one and only ^^

The theme is Identity Crisis so even if I don't like - I had to torment my Drow character a little. She will be alright - after intensive cure ^^
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Very nice :D I like it alot :D

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That is simply brilliant!
Thank you very much ^^

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When single shines the triple sun,
What was sundered and undone
Shall be whole, the two made one,
By Gelfling hand, or else by none.


The Writers Meow - we are cats who write better than King.
Why that's a compliment :D

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When single shines the triple sun,
What was sundered and undone
Shall be whole, the two made one,
By Gelfling hand, or else by none.


The Writers Meow - we are cats who write better than King.
ur welcome :D

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Nature the master of the creation
Learn more nature's geometry please go here
[link]
I like Drow :) You made great climax, I like your use of words.

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If they find us, they will crush us, grind us into tiny pieces, and blast us into oblivion!
When I write a poem, it goes very easily, I think I like writing them.

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When single shines the triple sun,
What was sundered and undone
Shall be whole, the two made one,
By Gelfling hand, or else by none.


The Writers Meow - we are cats who write better than King.
This is A-W-E-S-O-M-E, Mistress!! Poor Querrice ;p
No, she is not poor. She killed in that battle so many surface elves that you can't imagine ;p

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When single shines the triple sun,
What was sundered and undone
Shall be whole, the two made one,
By Gelfling hand, or else by none.


The Writers Meow - we are cats who write better than King.

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